Im a over achiever who underestimates Im a mid 40 year old business owner, mother of four and recovering addict. If I know one thing is that i wasted a lot of time and potential in my life. Today I live a life where I do not want to take my time for granted. It…
Essay 4 Final
Yvonne Pina ENG101 Fish farming, also known as aquaculture, has been practiced for thousands of years, with early evidence tracing back to ancient China and Egypt where fish were cultivated in controlled environments for food. In modern times, it has grown rapidly as a response to the overfishing of wild stocks and the increasing…
Essay #4 Rough draft
Farm Fishing Fish farming presents several nutritional and health benefits, it also raises concerns about its potential negative effects on our health and the environment. Fish farming, or aquaculture, has emerged as a crucial component of global food production, providing a steady supply of fish to meet the growing demand. As wild fish stocks…
Final Text Wrestling: How the Fridge Changed Flavor
Going back to ancient civilization we have always relied on a cold source to store and preserve food. Refrigeration has come a long way from snow caves. The time that the refrigeration invention has saved families is truly priceless. Because of the refrigeration invention we can now be working mothers in the field and still…
Annotation Proposal
My six questions will be; What is the history of cooking food outdoors? What are the instruments and tools used to cook with no utilities? What countries still use this method and why? What are some of those dishes those countries make ? What are some modern age appliances we have now that are used…
Summary Essay Draft:Food
The time that the refrigeration movement has saved families is truly priceless. Because of the refrigeration invention we can now be working mothers in the field and still feed our families home cooked meals on a regular basis. Being able to meal prep in advance is a great convenience ensuring nutritious meals are accessible during…
Revision process reflection
Truly I am very grateful for the revision process. The feedback received from my peer was spot on and it was nice to get a readers perspective. Having a peer edit helped me to understand what the reader is actually interpreting rather than what i believed I was telling in my memoir. I did…
Memoir: Fasting hit me fast Final Draft
I will always remember that New Years Eve where food and I took a break. Food and I basically decided to go our separate ways. Let’s just call it a divine intervention. I’ve always have had a love and natural talent for cooking and eating. Food was not just about eating for me it was…
Peer Edit: Sonias Memoir 1st Draft
Yvonnes peer edit review of Sonias Memoir Theme There seems to be two memoirs here #1. Your experience when visiting Portugal as a child #2. Your family traditions. Both great topics but it just seems that there could be more vivid moments if it was simplified to one or the other. Structure You have very…
Name the place Excercise
In the warehouse of a space compacted with faithful ,grateful, renewed god fearing people of the church, strangers but connected as brothers and sisters in christ ;shoulder to shoulder belting high pitched praises; the noisy children are muted by the worship teams bass and drums. Desperate just desperate deep howls from deep down in the…